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Jamie prefers to sing to him;
I insisted on knowing how he convinced her,
And he shows me the secrets again and again
With a flourish and a trick of the fingers

But when my fingers run down her copper hair,
Pressing it tightly against her shadowed neck,
I try to stroke it as finely as he does,
Until I hear the storm of her voice rumble under my fingertips;

However, my hands always forget how to compose themselves:
Which strands of hair need to cling to which fingers,
Where my thumb is placed against her smooth back,
How hard to stroke that fine copper hair of hers.

I try to please her, to make her sing,
But she only wails for me;
Jamie prefers to sing only to him;
And anybody else who knows how she works
©2009 ~mandrunited
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There is an 80% chance of me scrapping this. Heads up.

Anyway, I was watching the person who is teaching me to play guitar, and I got kind of annoyed that I just can't do it. I know, I know, I'll get it eventually - but it's a bit irritating until then. XD So this kind of sprung to mind.

...yes, I named my guitar Jamie. It was spontaneous, and now I can't stop referring to it as a she and as Jamie. DX I'm not alone, okay! My friend Mia has a guitar named Steve! WE ARE NOT CRAZY!

poem (c) me

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:iconsonictheonlyhedgehog:
Interesting personification! I REALLY like it... that's all I'm able to say.

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Ice-power-using-tchea-fruit-eating-Shenkuu-OBSESSED-hedgehogey-goodness!
Yeah, I\'m all that AND a bag of chips! :D :snowflake:

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